we sleep in separate beds,
to clear our clouded heads.
we keep our secrets wrapped
in gaudy signatures and glasses cracked
over organ flourishes.
we have rooms upon rooms,
some shortage of love
made up in statement wallpaper and bespoke furniture.
the sweeping staircase
holds centre place,
a marble decoy
feels as cold as the flesh
behind the welcome and the wine;
we keep our hands apart,
modern art
stands for wedding photos developed unseen,
money sadly spent
on a white pretence
that fill so many baby dreams;
tradition screams.
mais oui,
it seems that playground jests
have found their poorest manifest
in our little life of theatre.
mama, he thinks our homespun play
is swallowed like tequila,
he believes the empty nursery unnoticed,
sitting in his claw-foot bathtub
with a beard of bubbles,
oblivious to the pool of mockery
in which he is submerged;
mama, it would not take much!
oh, for some sweet humour with the help…
yes, i could be content.
[ Lois describes herself as a “confused english student,” though one quickly finds a polished, charming poet in her work. She has an elegant style that compliments her keen insight and whimsical sensibilities. It is a pleasure to present her work, and you can find more of it at Lois E. Linkins.]
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Man, Lois, this is brilliant! Great storytelling, powerful imagery!
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thank you my love! so glad you enjoyed it.
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It completely denounces the façade that is so many modern marriages, but in such an artful and poetic way – I’m sold!
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thanks so much! i’m so happy that you enjoyed it.
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I always mention you as an important part of our evolution. It gives me great joy to see your wonderful poetry on SD. First and foremost I am a lover of great poetry. You are very special.
Jasper
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that means such a lot to me!
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Brilliant writing from Lois E. Linkens
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thank you ❤
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Lois– your keen observant eye and incredible use of language always floors me. You paint masterfully with words in a way that is delicate and lovely while at the same time is fiercely intelligent and digs deep below the surface veneer. This is brilliant my friend.
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thank you so much as always Christine, you show me more support than i could ever ask for.
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Lois you are so bloody incredible. I love this piece and the empty menace your story carries behind it. Conventionally unconventional, this stanza just killed it for me!!
mais oui,
it seems that playground jests
have found their poorest manifest
in our little life of theatre.
Brilliant. I am all up on the Sam-interview-Lois train!
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thanks so much D! i quite liked that stanza too…
i’m totally up for the interview, especially if it’s from Sam!
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You have painted a portrait that is as deep as the Still Waters that run behind the stately stance.
Elegant and beautiful!
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thanks so much… such a lovely comment!
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You are very welcome
😉
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The cozy Americana of this piece felt amazing. That’s what I got from it, anyway. I’m all high on work being over
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thank you! it was inspired by real people that i met through a job, and i wanted to create this uncomfortable coziness.
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I wasn’t uncomfortable. Lol but that’s great!
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dammit… then perhaps i didn’t do as well as i imagined
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No, you did better than that
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thank you Kindra ❤
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You’re so welcome, Lois. I’m a ginormous fan of yours. ❤
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I love this piece. You paint a beautiful picture and punctuate it with such elegant nuance.
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such a lovely comment, thank you!
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Lois, I fucking love this. The “empty nursery unnoticed” and the way you piece together your story with a golden ratio of words. I really love your work. I vote for a Lois interview someday.
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sam… you don’t know how much that means to me, especially from you. thank you so much
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Maybe I should think of doing the interview. Warning: I probably only ask weird, unprofessional questions.
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i am completely up for that, the weirder the better.
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my latest poem for sudden denouement:
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